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DylanMann

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This cartoon is about a minute of Freezepark trying to set up an actual improv gag while flowjoe just keeps saying whatever comes to mind and effectively ruining whatever Freezepark was trying to execute. This could've been funny if a simple, understandable and well timed improv joke or scene was pulled off but it just wasn't. The animation was a mixed bag, when the cartoon started out there were really nice poses but not too much movement, towards the middle it started looking really good all around aside from a bit of messy line art, but at the end it seems corners were cut or Freeze got a bit lazy, there were simple boring poses and little to no movement. I would've liked to see this idea executed a bit better. It's almost like this was rushed to meet a deadline. I wouldn't feel right rating this any higher than a 2.5.

FreezePark responds:

thx for review bb <3

was funny with nice animation and some real hot backgrounds i love you

I'd say work on posing and frame by frame. The strange proportions and choices when it came to posing made it difficult to tell what I was looking at for the most part. Use a bit less tweens as well, there wasn't too many but I could see some places where a tween was used to cut a corner.

bad animation mixed with interlaced frame rate mmmmmm that's good

Bad lipsync and it's a video game parody.

Perfect length and stunning animation. I really loved this.

Really pretty colors but this isn't too great. There was a deal of poor animation that could've used a bit more time.

i had nothing to do with those cartoons

Dylan Mann @DylanMann

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